Review of: Report of Steel in Europe in 19th Century
Max: 6 points
Content: 6
Reason: The content in this essay is very special, amazing and interesting. It is very attractive to readers. When readers read the essay, they’ll feel curious at first and then they’ll know what happened. The content is connected with the theme and very supportive. The content makes the theme become stronger and meaningful.
Organization: 5
Reason: This essay has 5 paragraphs in total: one beginning, three contents which are sorted by time, and one end. But the essay is short of transitions, and it may make readers feel kind uncomfortable when they read the essay.
Vocabulary/ Word Choice: 4
Reason: This essay doesn’t focus too much on words, but contents instead. Words in this essay are very simple and easy to understand. Although the words here are very simple, some sentences in the essay are very interesting and meaningful.
Voice: 5
Reason: The voice of this essay is from indeed. The view is from the memory and experience. I described what happened first, then what I felt, next what I thought, the last is what I have done and what we should do in the future. The view of this essay is very clear and attractive.
Sentence Fluency: 4.5
Reason: The sentence is fluency and interesting. There aren’t many grammar problems here, and I used several different types of sentence structure to make it fresh and interesting.
Conventions: 4.5
Reason: This essay follows most of the rules of writing a good essay. I have double-checked the essay and didn’t find many errors there.
