the Commons Sense Is Usually Wrong

     Common sense should always be doubted by us. It's usually made up of some individuals for some specific goals because the individuals know common sense is the best way to make people credule and control them. The Nazis and Culture Revolution in China are proofs that the common sense is doubtful and harmful.

     In the World War II, Nazis were very enthusiasm in the common sense that exterminated all the Jewish. They tried so hard to find every Jewish and put them in the camp. The Nazis got lots of ways to exterminate the Jewish, such as burn, drugs, gas and so on. The Nazis lost their minds, and they didn't regard the Jews as human beings or even lower than animals. They just tried to find the most horrible way and the fastest way to exterminate. Many Jews tried to escape from their claws. No one wanted to die there. But the common sense was totally wrong, it's crazy and relentless. No one has the rights to exterminate others, and the Jews didn't do anything wrong.

     During 20th Century in China, China started a revolutionary wave called Culture Revolution. People in China who said anything good about capitalism and do something similar to capitalism would be regarded as renegades. It doesn't matter whether they're generals or poor kids. People would criticize them and put them in jail. Even He Long who is one of the most famous generals in China died in the Culture Revolution. The common sense was a big fault in the history. The chinese just followed the common sense without a thought. They should accept the new good things no matter where they came from.

     In conclusion, common sense is usually wrong, and doubtful. As we all knew now, the common sense that the Nazis believed is from Hitler; the common sense in the Culture Revolution is from the mind of Mao. In other words, common sense is usually made from some ideas of individuals. But individuals can be wrong and doubtful whether they are great or not.

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I Robbed the Woods Analysis

Poem 41

I robbed the Woods --
The trusting Woods.
The unsuspecting Trees
Brought out their Burs and mosses
My fantasy to please.
I scanned their trinkets curious -- I grasped -- I bore away --
What will the solemn Hemlock --
What will the Oak tree say?

Analysis:

Poem 41: The tone of this poem makes me
feel sad because it shows a dark side most of us have. Woods in the forest
stand for the good source most of us want. They are like money, entertainments,
benefits and so on. We just know how to be selfish and rob those things from
society or others. We don't know pay back because we are ungrateful. I also
think it may tell us what the war is. This poem can be used to explain that the
war is an action of the imperious countries who try to concur others and get as
much "treasures" as they can.

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When I Count the Seeds Analysis

Poem 40

When I count the seeds
That are sown beneath,
To bloom so, bye and bye –

When I con the people
Lain so low,
To be received as high –

When I believe the garden
Mortal shall not see –
Pick by faith its blossom
And avoid its Bee,
I can spare this summer, unreluctantly.

Analysis:

Poem 40: The tone of this poem makes me feel generous and optimistic. This poem shows that the thoughts in our minds sometimes are different from realistic. I got it when I read the description of "seeds" and "people." Sometimes the things we think are beautiful will usually be ignored in the real world. Sometimes the things we don't like are usually admired by others. So, Dickinson thinks why don't we make our own world we like? She describes a very beautiful garden which will never be disappeared in her mind. Then she says: "I can spare this summer, unrelunctantly" because the summer doesn't matter to her. This poem tells me, when we make some challenges, we should stay strong in our mind and never give up.

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Review of: Report of Steel in Europe in 19th Century

Review of: Report of Steel in Europe in 19th Century
Max: 6 points

Content: 6

Reason: The content in this essay is very special, amazing and interesting. It is very attractive to readers. When readers read the essay, they’ll feel curious at first and then they’ll know what happened. The content is connected with the theme and very supportive. The content makes the theme become stronger and meaningful.

Organization: 5

Reason: This essay has 5 paragraphs in total: one beginning, three contents which are sorted by time, and one end. But the essay is short of transitions, and it may make readers feel kind uncomfortable when they read the essay.

Vocabulary/ Word Choice: 4

Reason: This essay doesn’t focus too much on words, but contents instead. Words in this essay are very simple and easy to understand. Although the words here are very simple, some sentences in the essay are very interesting and meaningful.

Voice: 5

Reason: The voice of this essay is from indeed. The view is from the memory and experience. I described what happened first, then what I felt, next what I thought, the last is what I have done and what we should do in the future. The view of this essay is very clear and attractive.

Sentence Fluency: 4.5

Reason: The sentence is fluency and interesting. There aren’t many grammar problems here, and I used several different types of sentence structure to make it fresh and interesting.

Conventions: 4.5

Reason: This essay follows most of the rules of writing a good essay. I have double-checked the essay and didn’t find many errors there.

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Dickinson Poem Analysis

Poem 35:

Nobody knows this little Rose --
It might a pilgrim be
Did I not take it from the ways
And lift it up to thee.
Only a Bee will miss it --
Only a Butterfly,
Hastening from far journey --
On its breast to lie --
Only a Bird will wonder --
Only a Breeze will sigh --
Ah Little Rose -- how easy
For such as thee to die!

Poem 35: The tone of this poem is kind sad. And it’s ironic that Rose is very beautiful but doesn’t get any great attention except some bees, butterflies… But after the Rose was lifted by people and get admired from people, it would usually die soon. The Rose is symbolized many people, the whole life of the Rose is just like most of our life. Dickinson feels that the life of people is very short. One man fights for his success during most of his life, but he can just enjoy his success for very short time.

Poem 39

It did not surprise me—
So I said—or thought—
She will stir her pinions
And the nest forgot,

Traverse broader forests—
Build in gayer boughs,
Breathe in Ear more modern
God's old fashioned vows—

This was but a Birdling—
What and if it be
One within my bosom
Had departed me?

This was but a story—
What and if indeed
There were just such coffin
In the heart instead?

Poem 39: The tone of this poem is sad neither. I think the bird in this poem is stand for a spouse or friend of someone. It describes that the spouse (friend) betrays this man, and looks for new spouse (friend). As she said” This was but a story”, it means the same thing happened before. The rebel left his previous spouse (friend) to the man. So the man doesn’t feel surprise when the “Bird” left him for a new “Host”. Although it didn’t surprise the man, the man still feels sad and can’t forget what happened to him. So he said” There were just such coffin in the heart instead”.

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